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Waste Of Time

I try my best to keep us together,
But I guess my best just ain't good enough,
I want us to stay friends,
Your someone I can't risk to lose,
I'm really trying to fix this,
But we must have fallen apart a long time ago,
Fine then I get the point,
Go on then delete my number,
I don't care anymore,
Burn all the photos,
Ignore me when we pass in the halls,
But there shall always be one thing,
Your always going to carry with you...

...the memories...

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If he wants to leave, Then he can go. I'm not bothering with him anymore. He's just a waste of time...Wait, TITLE! Waste Of Time...LOL

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  • Abner
    August 5

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    i can relate to this poem, in fact i would like to send it to someone..with ur permission of course thanks.


  • mizerdrea
    July 3, 2008

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    Good!!!

    If I were you,,I won't have a guts like you..
    I just couldn't learning to let go of someone..
    Cool...


  • EntombedCrystalRose
    July 2, 2008

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    I love this, as its almost you shouting at the person, telling them this, and explaining how you feel... it gives it a real feel of emotions... good poem!


    • Captain Jenny
      July 2, 2008
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      I just had to read it out loud lol...This would be the kind of things I'd say to him... Thanks


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 1, 2008

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    Whoaaa, I absolutely loved this one too ! Full of so much emotion, and well, I definitely hear ya ! haah, been therrre, done that :] Incredible piece. Loved the format of it. Keep writinggg ! ♥

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