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I'm so sorry

I'm sorry, so so sorry
That I couldn't talk
Whenever you need me to
I'm sorry, so so sorry
That I chose secrets
Over hurting you
Even though you said
You wanted me to.
I'm so sorry that
I never listened
Before you left
I'm so sorry because
You didn't know
What I've done
I'm so sorry because
You won't ever know
What I've done to myself.
I know it's wrong
To follow down Dawn's path
That horrible path.
I'm so sorry

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  • her-four-letter-lie
    August 20, 2008

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    great job.
    very...umm articulate i guess is the word.
    you get the point across.
    you show emotion.

    overall great job.=]