Tenderly sinking
into cool nectar
it slowly drinks
my body freeing
all sorrows and
calmly immortalizing
the sweet soul
locked inside
my virgin smile
Author notes
Prompt: Picture & 20-30 words
Picture Credit: happy love by tenchibaka
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A contest entry
- Quickie by Angelflower.
600 points, ended July 1, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Don't like it ... Leave. Simple.
Comments
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Beautiful imagery! A great sense of feeling free and re-freshed. Being able to shed the worries that go on with every day life, and just being able to start over. If only this were possible for many! Congratulations on the Gold!
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wow, your imagery is flowing in this one. well deserved gold, no doubt.
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i loved it!!
and great picturee :]
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A beautiful picture!
Words can paint a vivid picture as you have done with this peaceful & joyous write.
I enjoyed it very much.
Sincerely.
Who iam
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Awww I really love the image that you created here... You did such a wonderful job with that picture.. This was soft yet sad in many ways.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..
Angel
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Wow I like your don't like it leave Im gonna put im insane want to come join my party lol This is good Amanda goodluck in the contest much love
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wow what an awesome write you have done here.... i like this...... keep penning.... thanks for sharing this and goood luck in contest......!
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*be's a smartass* OHHH I LOVE THIS ONE AMANDA KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
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LOL! You dag
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lol. You knew someone was going to do it
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