When I cried where were you?
When I needed to talk, I missed your voice
When I wanted comfort, you were elsewhere
When I needed someone to love I thought you were there
When you needed someone I was here
You could have just asked.
When you wanted comfort
I was willing to help in your times of need
When you needed someone to love
You knew I would always be faithful
Then why I do still love you
When I get nothing in return?
Why do I still miss you
When you don't say a single word?
Why can't I move on
When you seem so far gone?
A contest entry
- when... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 4, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Ah..this is the deep voice of the friend..I love the interal cry for the friend..here in this work..well done...
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