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Deli Love

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You're
my
everything
bagel-
with
cream
pleased
schmear.








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  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    July 25

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    I loved that Paul! Nice imagery. I want to eat her.

    (No you don't.

    Yes, I do. She sounds yummy, I like cream cheese

    (You like peanut butter better on your bagels anyway)

    How do you know?

    (I am you)

    *spreading peanut butter on my bagel*

    Oh gosh, I'm going crazy.

    Nice write!

    This triggered so many thoughts Paul, shame on you.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 2, 2008

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    Yum. too much. absolutely prone to indulge. Well done. Congrats on the emerald cup.


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    July 2, 2008
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    Luvit!

    Tight and clean.
    Thanks.

    Tom


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    yum i like this here i think you really did a great job here i enjoyed this a lot good luck to you
    in the contest

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