From your sweet heart, a blanket of love
to warm me in difficult times,
reminding me of our love
beyond words this feeling
alive in my heart
today, always
hearts entwined
this love
ours
our
love, true
lives on still
though seperate
lives we now do live-
I'll be there for you, still
just look over your shoulder
always and always, forever
you'll be in my heart till my last breath.
Author notes
Mirrored Nonet
Syllable count
9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1,
1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9
Thanks goes to Amera for teaching me this style.
Love ya sis!
A contest entry
- A Song Inspired options contest by missjilleen.
700 points, ended July 19, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A nonet, very interesting. I have never seen that style before. I really love old songs, and my choir sang this one year, and it just stuck with me since it is quite popular. Very nice, being there for the one you love, and knowing that they can always count on you, and hopefully vice versa. thanks for your entry
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Beautiful
Indeed for I know as my husband And I part with age and the spirit calling we shall remain wed in heart forever and no one will taint the memories within
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Excellent
Such a fabulous use of form. So very skillful. Best of luck in the contest.
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Very very nice! I've tried this before, but vice versa, going from one syllable up, but it wasn't nearly effective. Great job!
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Wowzers!!
I don't think I have tried a Nonet before
Wahoooooooooooo~
This is a Beauty Precious and Love the message You have brought forth
Lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyy~
Eventually sometime in the future I may have to give this a whirl
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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This is beautiful! Wow! Most nonets seem chopped up but this flows like music and has a lovely emotional image. Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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