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All Alone

Suddenly, I find I’m not sleeping,
It’s impossible when you live alone,
In this world that death is too close to.

The pain I feel, will it ever stop?
I wish for it to lift from my heavy heart,
so I can feel happiness again.

I sharpen my blades,
Hang a strongly tied rope,
And stand on the railing of my balcony.

I’m preparing for the pain,
Of this sadness of being alone,
prepared to do something rash.

If I don’t make it through this,
This new sadness,
Don’t call for any help…

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  • Tennyo
    August 4, 2008
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    this is really well written! go airy!