Allie and Melbourne, laying on the sheet
nose to nose, feet to feet.
She a dapple, He's just red,
All tired out, romping on the bed.
A month apart, Allie's older,
he's the baby, but much bolder.
Little gifts, left on the floor,
too late to get them out the door.
Bits of stuff strewn everywhere,
Hubby's about to tear his hair.
Just the price one has to pay;
for puppies will have their way!
Author notes
This is about our two mini Dachshunds which are known to be stubborn dogs hard to train. We love them dearly and hope to re-coop some money by breeding them.
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This is a lot of fun to read. Anyone who has had a puppy can relate to this. "little gifts left on the floor, to late to get them out the door" what a cute way to describe that. I loved the humor in this.
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VERY CUTE!!!
Aw, though dogs will have their way and not always tell you when they have to go. They sound adorable!
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this is very cute and yes very hard to train, stubborn is a mild statement,but wonderful companions, thank you for this entry to our contest
Linda
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aww you have cute puppies...i believe they're much bigger now maybe.
cute poem that matches the poem to a T
good luck in the contests
Dani♥
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That is the cutest! I love the pic. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Thanks for entering! That's very cute.. I love dogs myself! Great poem.
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This is too cute
Very well done and tooo cute indeed
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this is sooo cute
Allie and Melbourne, laying on the sheet
nose to nose, feet to feet.
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that WTG
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Awww they are so cute. I like that this poem is about them. I am glad I don't get any of those "little gifts" though. Thanks for entering. Nice write!
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cute!
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We always had pets but they were never mine except when it came time to feed them or clean up a mess they made. I enjoyed the read. Best wishes in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Such a cute picture, and a cute poem to go along. I love dogs to death. This poem, just made me love them more. =) To see the differences between two dogs, and write a lovely poem. Excellent. Keep on writing.
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Cute!
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Cute poem you have penned here. It has been years since I had any puppies, my twin girls which are far more in comparision as to expenses' this year being their senior year! OUCH...Can't even think of the price of prom dresses and class rings yet!
Anything in life can be expensive!
Thank you for sharing this poem. ~Sie
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A sketch of mystic truth you brought with a feeling to reveal and to explore the subjects of this poetry..wonderful indeed....
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