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Graciously Giving

 

 

 

 

 

she steps

on the skipping stones

that were carelessly cast

into tempest tides,
and counts the time
until she sinks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Image by Tintz at deviantart.com
I used the picture prompt.

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  • nature mithya
    August 10, 2008
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    Yes life is unending till we sink.

    Congrats.
    You are good at short takes.

  • nature mithya
    August 10, 2008
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    Yes life is unending till we sink.

    Congrats.
    You are good at short takes.

  • Perfect Insanity
    July 3, 2008

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    Your piece implies so very much with so few words. You've done a lot with the picture. I love the format, it emphasizes the story being told. Good luck in the contest! =)


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 2, 2008

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    The poem fitted the picture so well. It was just plain, beautiful. I enjoyed it a whole lot. I hope to read more from you.


  • Purush
    July 1, 2008

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    VERY EXCITING VERSE WITH DEEP THOUGHTS
    ALL THE BEST IN THIS CONTEST
    "and counts the time
    until she sinks."
    INDISPUTABLE


  • And Hyetal
    July 1, 2008
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    Your poetry is my new lover.


  • SuicidalLover
    July 1, 2008

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    Oh...I like this....very unique...as for a tittle then I would suggest... - Graciously Giving - I don't know sounds good to me. Thank you for entering.
    ~Kystal Angel

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