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No Child

"You can't have a child"
He says.
I cry for hours.
How could this be?
That's all I wanted.
A son,
Or daughter.
Now,
I will never have,
Anyone to spread,
My name.
My husband is,
Dying of old age.
We have no children,
Nothing to bring joy.
Why must this be?
I thought,
I had more time.
Looks like,
In the end.
I will always just be,
Childless.

Author notes

My mother... even if she does not believe, can not have children anymore... and when she tries... it's always a miscarige... so I understand this feeling oh so well... I hope you all enjoy this poem.

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  • dragontuba
    July 5, 2008
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    it's hard i know....i'm sorry...thanks for entering..

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    I hear you

    I have never even been able to get pregnant at all but I have learned to live with it but at times I cry for in my older days their wont be any phone calls no visits just me so thats a lonely place to think about


  • foryourowngood
    July 2, 2008

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    that is a very difficult situation, and i am pretty much in that situation so i can relate to this piece. its well written, especially from anothers point of view.


  • penman gold member
    July 1, 2008
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    Excellent

    A very heartfelt expression for within. so very well done. Best of luck in the contest.