Your name tells me you love me, it tells me that you will always be there when i need you most. Every time I hear your name my heart skips a beat, reminds me of your warmth. I hear your voice and I am stunned, stunned by its beauty, its passion, and its pure essence. Your voice alone could melt steal, buckle a man's knees, and even break his heart. Yet at the same time heal a broken one. I look into your eyes and I am paralyzed, paralyzed by their depth, their wonder, and their love. When you look at me a warmth fills my heart, it takes control and leaves me speechless, leaves me so I can do nothing but stair, nothing but dream about holding in my arms once more. But you see all of this is said by your name, for it tells me that you love me and that is all i need to survive. For your name says it all...
A contest entry
- Heartstrings and Symphonies by Rogue.
600 points, ended July 3, 17 entries
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Comments
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Wow this is great! Can someones name really tell you that about them. I think I need to meet people with better names! JK I really loved these lines:
Your voice alone could melt steal, buckle a man's knees, and even break his heart. Yet at the same time heal a broken one
You got some skill!
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It was awesome!!! i loved it. you totally expressed ur emotions
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Wow
This is great, and symbolizes and embodies the many very...complex aspects of love brilliantly! Thank you so much for your entry! -
OMG! this is just wow. this is like the best poem i've ever read. and i'm not just saying that, it really is. so much emotion and love for one person. it's just amazing. wonderful poem!!
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