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Life of a Loon

Missing image
heads tilted towards heavens,
discovering sights of pleasure

from Minnesota to Ontario
gracing skies of blue,
linked eternal through life

seeking safe havens,
close to waters edge

gathered leaves and moss,
soft beds for hatch-lings

natures calling unique,
runs eternal through veins










Author notes

I hope Carol doesn't mind but I feasted my eyes on her wonderful artwork. I fell in love with the loon while visiting Canada last year. Her pictures brought back wonderful memories.


The picture belongs to Carol and can be found here: http://www.flickr.com/photos/lady_breathes

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    July 15, 2008

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    Oh how beautifully you bring one of my loons to life. I kept this one for msyelf because I love the shape, the graceful neck, the bend of head to breast.... and yoru poems speaks to this. Thank you for such a nicely done piece and for using my loon picture.

  • everhopeful
    July 7, 2008

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    i can hear them flying over head as I read this
    Brings back memories of a few short hours spent at camp with you.

    wonderfu


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    I know Carol, and she will adore this!
    I can see her now breathing a sigh~
    Beautiful poetry inspired by beautiful art
    Awesome entry!

    Lynda


    • fortyninereasons gold member
      July 6, 2008
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      Carol's art work is just as amazing as her poetry. The picture I used is only one of many that she has taken.
      Juls


      • poet2angels gold member
        July 6, 2008
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        Oh, I know...I have seen many of her pieces....Just so amazing...


  • Cannonsfire
    July 3, 2008

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    Awww hun she will love this and love you even more for visiting her artwork; clever lady that she is. Just wonderful Love, C

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