Months ago I realized you had me
Hanging from those little strings I tried to mend
You lost me in a moment,
Of feelings I can't pretend
Countless hours I lay awake
Unable to forget your name
Knowing that your eyes changed everything
No longer was I the same
Our paths crossed too much
But I had to stay away
Best friends we might have been
But there was too much we didn't say...
Months ago my life changed
But you weren't my disaster
You might have thought different...
But you're exactly what I was after
This heart of mine skips a beat
Each time you pass me by
A smile saved just for me
And still I don't know why
The world stops when you're around me,
The only one in your eyes
No one know's why I love you...
But I know exactly why
Everyone asks what I see in you...
...but baby...
It's a million little things
A contest entry
- the human heart by And Hyetal.
1125 points, ended July 6, 2008, 17 entries
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just like every other thing you write
so freaking amazing!
i wish i could write like you!
you tell a story of love and brokenhearts
and its crazy how your stories are so relatable
i love it
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i love it. it seems like you are trying to tell someone something but you don't want to tell him only you don't know how to say it
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wow... you are really good write
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this is made of pure emotions. and i think i know who you wrote this for?? amazing writing keep it up!!
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I really enjoyed this. It was penned from the heart seemingly.
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