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Relief

A million diamonds falling from the skies
And shattering like glass upon the Earth
A million smiles can greet the sweet surprise
A summer storm delivers all it's worth

The air was black and heavier than gold
With faces longer than a winter night
But suddenly we're young instead of old
And what we thought was wrong is clearly right

A flash across the sky and then the sound
Of ancient drums that tell of battles won
Oppressive heat no longer to be found
So lovers all around can think of fun

And I'm alone and standing in the rain
To smile and dream of loving you again


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  • JandAK
    July 2
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    Beautiful

    Love your sonnets. This one is like a dream.


  • Sandygram silver member
    July 1

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    Such Sweet Words

    You have penned a beautiful sonnet Jeff. Dreams can take us anywhere we want to. To be with that special someone. That is one thing no one can take away from us. This was a pleasure to read. You take care.

    Bless You,
    Sandy

  • No your not alone, I am here.
    And i dont plan on going anywhere.
    Rain or no rain, Your stuck with me.

    Love you so

    Passions