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Dark

Pulled down a dark and quiet road,
not being able to see whats ahead.
All the while dragging a heavy load,
fleeing from a past that is dread.

You see a light in the distance,
then it begins to fade.
Deleting proof of its existence,
leaving you alone and afraid.

Its a vast world we are in,
one where loneliness can kill.
Something thats hard to begin,
crawling up this lifeless hill.



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  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 13

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    Strong work, my friend...nice to see new work from you...great flow and rather profound in thought...nicely done...
    Love,
    mom
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  • CharcoalScreams
    July 13
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    Love it babe xx

  • arafura
    July 3
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    Very good my friend. I can feel it... I can see it...


  • B.f.m.v.
    July 2
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    i love it


  • maktub
    July 2

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    long time since I've read any of your stuff...
    I really liked this...Especially:
    "Its a vast world we are in,
    one where loneliness can kill."


  • YoureNoGoodForMe gold member
    July 1

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    Oooh, I really liked this. Especially the imagery and just. Everything. So little lines hold so much meaning. Incredible write. I love the image this portrays. Keep writing♥
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