Raindrops are falling all around
come dancing with me
as they fall
we'll be lost in our own childhood merriment
Joyful and full of glee
you and me
dancing out of pure delight
as the raindrops continue thier downward flight
Lean in and kiss me
i'll steal the kiss right back
and keep it in my pocket
Come dancing with me
and we'll dance til the sun comes out.
Author notes
option 1 use of title to steal a kiss
A contest entry
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1050 points, ended July 8, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh I Loved This
This is so sweet and I love that you'll keep the kiss in your pocket. Oh love so sweet like those first love kisses in the rain.
Come dancing with me
and we'll dance til the sun comes out.
Sound wonderful. Beautiful flow and imagery as well. Thank you for sharing with me and also commenting on one of the hardest poems I've ever written.
Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Dancing in the rain is my absolute favorite thing to do. I like this poem a lot.
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this was cute was it about anyone in perticular (WINK WINK)? Very Nice
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