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To Steal A Kiss

Raindrops are falling all around
come dancing with me
as they fall
we'll be lost in our own childhood merriment

Joyful and full of glee
you and me
dancing out of pure delight
as the raindrops continue thier downward flight

Lean in and kiss me
i'll steal the kiss right back
and keep  it in my pocket

Come dancing with me
and we'll dance til the sun comes out.

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wohadreambig- sister

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  • desiredpain
    January 10
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    Very nicely written! Welcome to my family, sister!


  • Dygurl
    July 1, 2008
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    a bright and wonderful piece, full of .... hope. loved it. good luck in your contest.