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In My Dreams

Missing image
All my memories make me smile
when I think of you.
Even when we're apart; I feel
your presence, I feel hope.
Alive is your touch.
I get chills down my spine
hoping one day you'll
be in my arms again; or my dreams
as always my love.
  ~~*~~

Huge hugs, honey-pants
Obtained over time
Passionate kisses
Each sunset until sunrise.


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  • Rhyming from Rehab
    July 3, 2008

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    I liked the sensual tones to this poem, and the beautiful imagery it painted into my mind. Felt this poem in my spirit. Congratulations on your silver. Very Soft and Beautiful!


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 2, 2008

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    Thank you for this wonderful entry
    into my contest.

    Best wishes to you... please keep writing.

    Riftkin

  • angel-4ever
    July 1, 2008
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    great

    This poem reminds me of myself


  • Lady Eventide
    July 1, 2008

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    Loved this. Loved how you clashed two forms together. This really makes me all warm and fuzzy inside...like a teddy bear. Excellent job. All the best!