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[ Here I stand, as though nothing is wrong. ]

Here I stand, as though nothing is wrong.
But in reality my world is falling apart.
I can feel the breeze, and hear the birds,
But that doesn't change anything at all.
My skin still burns, and the wounds won't heal.
I can't breathe so well, and it hurts to speak.
I feel isolated though people try to help.
And i want to die, and just start again.

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 3, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    Sometimes, when we feel lost within ourselves, it seems that nothing else matters.  I can feel the emotional tug in your words.  You have expressed them well.  Take a deep cleansing breath and hold your head up.  It will get better.

    Welcome to AP.  If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.

    *lightning* Storm
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