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Power...

Betray your friends,
betray your lover,
and power beyond measure
is yours....

The blood red eyes,
the shadowed heart,
the clouded mind
that refuses to see
what these bloodied hands have done.

I...
I can't go back...
can I?

No!
Get away,
don't say you can help.
I'm already gone.
You wouldn't understand,
you're afraid of the power.

I've embraced it!
I took it in like a lover,
and exiled my heart,
all that you knew from me is dead.

Don't make me kill you.
You were my master,
but no longer.
My justice will reign,
and you can't stop it.

I won't be denied!!!
You used her against me?
You betrayed me?
I shunted aside the past,
forgot it to bring order,
and yet you cling to it.

You don't know the power I've seen,
you couldn't dream of it if you dared.
Those fools think they know what the people need...
they couldn't even save themselves!


Get back!
Don't make me kill you....

Author notes

This is to be read while playing this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=viYn2Z8h6iU&feature=related

I kinda redid the argument between obi and ani from ep. 3 ^^ I hope it sounds ok.

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  • Kappa Pyua
    August 6, 2008

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    interesting intake on that part of the film. If I had not read the author notes parts of it sounded confusing, like missing a vital piece of information. but now it makes sence, the part about her against me. Not the usual stuff I read but, I enjoyed it.


  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 26, 2008

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    omgosh!

    dark.dark.dark! this is such an angsty piece! but written perfectly! keep writing kays!

    AWESOME!!!


  • Dlvvanzor
    July 2, 2008
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    Ok, I read it again with the soundtrack playing. It's utterly haunting. That's amazing.


  • Dlvvanzor
    July 2, 2008
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    I totally knew it was about Anakin from the second I started reading it! Great job!!


  • And Hyetal
    July 1, 2008
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    ~~~


  • Darkrunn
    July 1, 2008
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    I know it's not the best, I jsut haven't been on my muse for a looooooong time and I needed to do something! O.O

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