I waited
For over three hours
I waited
For you to come home
I wanted to tell you everything
Everything I had ever felt
Everything I never got to say
You never came home,
Well you did, but you just ignored me
My words fell into the silence of your empty heart
All of my dreams, wishes, wants, hopes and desires,
were destroyed when you quit
How could you have been so stupid?
Too just let me go
Now I sound arrogant, but I'm not
I did everything you ever wanted
I stood up for you when no-one would
I was your everything,
you held me, your really held me
It was magic, the first time we kissed,
it was love, I really felt it this time,
I loved you, I really did
But you, you let me down,
You broke my heart, you smashed it,
now there's nothing left, nothing to say,
my words came from my heart, now,
I cannot speak any-longer, my tears choke my voice,
you broke my heart this time, you really broke my heart..
Author notes
4.Just love period, doesnt matter what kind (broken
love, together, New love, breakup) it doesnt matter
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sorry for what has happened to you if this is personal, breakups stink
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why was i removed?
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that about made me cry,a very moving piece! -
This made me feel sad, though I did feel the 'I waited' a little awkward... I do like this though, but it was a little bit strange in some places, choice of words wise.
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beautifuly written
thanks for entering and good luck<3
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