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The Gift

To know the depth of your soul,
to see the meaning within your heart;
we will look beyond the horizon
and find a brand new start.


That I have received the greatest gift,
the truth in love's disguise.
A glimpse of heaven I have found
within the shadows of your eyes.

Author notes

Prompt :

~To love is to receive a glimpse of heaven.~
by Karen Sunde

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  • Elisa Ann
    July 3

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    very romantic and a very dreamy feeling to this poem. I really found it had a soothing touch to it. Congratulations on your gold.


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 2

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    Thank you for this wonderful entry
    into my contest.

    Best wishes to you... please keep writing.

    Riftkin


  • Rovingone gold member
    July 1

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    So filled with love. Such a romantic feeling to it. This poem is so intoxicating. It just makes you want to drift through it over and over.


  • vindicativevisage
    July 1

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    Oooh. Me likey! The second verse...especially the last line...was really well executed. Lovely sentiment! Good luck!