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Captured Soul

My screams silent

My death true.

Enemies know

My blood is red, white and blue

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Please credit Flag Smoke by Keb-freakingnews.com. Beautiful inspiration

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  • Desire gold member
    July 4, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Captured Soul
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept being shown the word: Braveheart and seeing what appears to be Mel Gibson holding some sorta flag- I've not seen the movie but getting that it is from a movie-
    Also being shown a cabin- like a closeup and then it far away- closeup again and then far away-
    I'm being shown the image of a man in a painting where he is holding his hands to his ears~I think it is a Van Gogh painting-
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Magnificent take on the prompt~
    Powerful message & images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    My screams silent....
    Unique Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Florida Sunshine
    July 4, 2008
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    What a final impact line!!! You had me cheering you along the way!!!

    Good luck in the contest.


  • Kari gold member
    July 4, 2008

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    Wow, this was great in a chilling way. I really enjoyed this piece a lot right here. It's deep, and thought provoking. Shows a lot.
    Happy 4th,
    Kari