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~Teardrops in Puddles of Uncertainty~

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Hearts beating, uncertain of love,
a complicated web of illusions.
Barriers hold back tears of confusion,
release them beautiful dove for they will run dry.

Hidden gems with hearts of gold,
learning to live & love, with out bruising permanently,
afraid of being left alone in the cold,
opening the door to pain's excruciating knocks.

Examining life's intricate design,
fragile beauty destined to merge pathways
of platinum amidst journeys of exploration,
strongly planted firm.
Nature taunts freedom to set free,
only to open your heart again when your
wounds have healed, a pebble cast in a puddle, ripples of hurt pass.

Author notes

Prompt: Uncertain Love..(take it where you want)
(YOU CAN USE THE PICTURE AS THE PROMPT AS WELL JUST PLEASE CREDIT: don__t_say_goodbye_by_WCS_Wildcat AND PLACE IT IN YOUR AUTHORS NOTES..)

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 8

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    You did a wonderful job.. I loved the flow of this..It was really soft and smooth... And the imagery was so vivid and detailed.. I really enjoyed this.. You put a lot of emotion in this piece, and I thank you very much for sharing.. Best of luck..

    Angel

  • Nevel
    July 2

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    A beautiful, thoughtfully poem, it seems you clear the road for love again, honestly looking what hold you back, putting a great lines...I guess men's attitude towards love is uncertain, just my thought...Great job!! Good luck


  • imahealer gold member
    July 2

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    Love is the one thing in life that is always uncertain. Using the butterfly as the metaphor you have skillfully crafted a poem describing hurts, healing and hope. Your imagery is so beautiful. "nature taunts freedom to set free" ... how beautiful is this line? LOved this very true and poignant poem of the heart! Best wishes, sis!
    Love,
    Linda


  • creationsfromheart silver member
    July 1

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    what more can I say accept BEautifulllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 1
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    Very well written & Versed---Excellent take on the picture---Best of luck in the contest!!


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 1

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    the picture is beautiful, along with the poem. Great job. I just love all your work. I wish you the best of luck.
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