Erotic dreams of wonder filled with satin lace and powder
creative imaginative feelings colours screaming ever louder
enrich the playing of the organ with the scent of female form
take heed of all who warn you lest you’re luckless and forlorn.
Shadows masking the guilt ridden soul of those who have all to hide,
devils gnaw on unborn memories whilst the alcohol flows deep inside,
forgiveness scorned by the only true love hurt in the aftermath,
screeching wayward gremlins dying constantly in your path.
Hidden agendas forced out of hiding while children’s lifeblood flows,
arching towards enlightenment, with every collapse the power grows,
who shall come to save us all from the hate that lies within,
what kind of creature lying in wait as we commit to mortal sin?
Bow down before the one true Lord the host of evil host's'
reject yea now the infernal one with his son and holy ghost's
revel for eternity enjoy the pleasures of the flesh,
let us all as one be naked and in a pile now mesh.
Who saved the world from disaster?
Who saw the clarity through the prism?
Who gave us all our one last chance?
Who performed the exorcism?
Author notes
credit "Terra Exorcism Surveillance - George Grie"
A contest entry
- Dark Quickie by Luckintheshadows.
550 points, ended July 4, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre- Write Show Down by D Saul So Sexy.
600 points, ended August 15, 2008, 30 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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a wonderful dark sad poem full of some brilliant imagery and some strong emotions good luck in the contest
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WOW! gripping write. The words flow in a beautiful cadence through my mind.
I love the imagery and darkness that comes through, and those last 4 lines/questions...absolutely masterful!
Thanks for sharing this, and for entering my contest,
Luck.
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