I am stone.
Porcelain beauty, all you said
I am rock.
Resurrected pain and inherent depression.
Reach for me, want the beauty of the woman.
I am stone.
Vanity, blasphemy, will you listen to me?
My tongue is carved into rock and petrified
petrified
Groping darkness, fire heats but does not burn
Even if I feel the pain, fading fading, return.
I am rock.
I want you to know, to understand,
I'd reach but I am locked to be a vessel
something for the eye and never the arms
something for the hands and never the heart.
I am stone.
Author notes
Terra Exorcism Surveillance - George Grie
A contest entry
- Dark Quickie by Luckintheshadows.
550 points, ended July 4, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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OH! superb..I love this, your words are so gripping and almost agonising, the utter dispassion I feel from this write is enormous! You've really done such an awesome job with the prompt.
These two lines really leapt out to me:
"something for the eye and never the arms
something for the hands and never the heart."
^^^awesome imagery!
Thanks for sharing, and for entering my contest,
Luck. -
This was a wonderful poem, :0 I am jealous at how you took the picture, compared to mine. You did a lovely job. Good luck in the contest.


