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nature

flooded amid languid tranquility
the ebbing of waves gently caress the coast
such an awestruck sensation of serenity
is emanated from the multi-hued heavens
the acquiescence to nature's call
is harmonized by the magnanimous sunset
preached by the omniscient cumuli
belted by the philosophic foliage
tenderly crossing the crisp firm moss
engulfed with no trepidations
a spider weaves her intricate web
hoping to catch another willing soul

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  • Nicada silver member
    July 3, 2008

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    I have read through this several times and find it to be a very beautiful write, but I can't see how it relates to my contest on solitude. If you can explain to me I will consider it. A stunning nature poem. Thanks for entering. Blessings, Patty


  • Simply Olivia
    July 2, 2008

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    Some parts of this poem that I especially like are: "the magnanimous sunset", and the ending.

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