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- Picante Salsa - (Pick up the Pace)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Voyeuristic eyes ventured to The Discovery Channel
with wanton lust for remote control button compressions
on sleek ebony gadget [AA battery operated]

Drool beads fell from mouth agape as mating rituals
of Amazonian crickets observed, stimulated hormones
into overdrive [from bathroom to recliner- visa versa]

Masculine desires dipped finger into curvacious bowl,
nacho chips gathered within Sargento's chasm;
tongue~~ licked across greasy lips smothered in 'Pace';
'Picante salsa' stains during Hippos Gone Wild episode.

   












Author notes

Reference to Pace-
name of product:
Pace- Picante Salsa

Sargento- name brand of cheese...

**Note: No Creatures were harmed in the making of this piece!
Hippo was doing community service
at the time shot was captured...
(rumor has it)


Prompt Choice:

3. Snail pace ecstasy

Ten Lines more or less...

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Comments


  • A63-Angel
    July 13

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    i liked this! nicely done. will have different thoughts now when i reach for the remote....this was hot without being overly seasoned.


  • penman gold member
    July 4
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    Excellent

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Arzab
    July 2

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    Beautiful write. I liked the second stanza the best. Only you could write about creatures in nature and make it sound like a masterpiece. Thanks for sharing your talent and keep that pen flowing.