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Somewhere in Skin

It was in her skin
the taste of sin

It was in her touch
the want of lust

It was in her eyes
and
that playful smile

It was between her thighs
my real prize

It was in the night
where we first met

It is in my memory
I can't forget

Now I always look
somewhere it skin

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  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    July 18, 2008
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    This is lovely, and it is in the skin, the smell of woman or man. Love is after all a smell, and everything linked to smell. Lovely.


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    July 1, 2008
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    I love the flow of this poem...It is showered with a romantic sensuality...thank you, poet...


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    July 1, 2008

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    This is very sensual indeed. Sounds like my first love. Good luck in the contest