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Tears

Tears don't
just blind normal
vision they can blind you
from the world so you're just wrapped in
your pain
but they
can pull open
your eyes also so your
understanding becomes clearer...
sometimes.

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Just don't ask...I don't really like it. Bit preachy and boring...so yeah.

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 9, 2008
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    what a unique way to look at tears. i liked this


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 1, 2008

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    Wow i liked this its very well written

    its short but you made your point

    Good job

    ..

    Shelly


  • xXmidnightstarXx
    July 1, 2008

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    no no, I like it. You're right. Tears can sometimes open your eyes to your surroundings and block you from it to. Again, I like it