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American Flag

Winds sway the sparkling stars
Proud waves reach for the skies
Purity flows within whites
Laid next to red stripes
Painted by proud forefathers
With their blood shed for freedom

Gently liberty gathers
Within galaxy of blue
Radiant diamond for every state
Weaving a quilt of unity
Rendering warmth to the world
In the pursuit of harmony

Blessed be the diversified union
Bow to the flag with respect
It’s not the country it represents
But it’s all about you and me

Freedom is a gift so precious
The symbol is the American Flag
Don’t taint it with disrespect
But live its true meaning
With head held high
And heart beating with pride

Remember the symbolism
Flag is everything but a piece of cloth
It stands for -
“-All people are created equal
In pursuit of true happiness
Shall all enjoy freedom and liberty”

Author notes

I just hope I represent the true meaning of an American Flag!

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  • Congratulations on winning the gold trophy!
    The first two stanzas are superb!


  • Sharcu silver member
    July 5

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    Thanks for your entry!!

    Wow! This describes the American Flag much deeper than I've ever experienced it! Very well written and I loved your style. Keep up the great work!

    • Thanks

      Thanks a lot for liking this poem enough to give it a gold... I appreciate your time and comment. Take care Minoo
  • you know i have never really thought of it but this is something else, i mean you have done a great job on this, i will never look at the flag again. keep it flowing and good luck in the contest