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Freedom To Soar


Gypsy soul soars
in a wanting heart

longing for freedom
on butterfly wings

~some day she'll
  rise above.

 

 

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  • acalmingvoice
    July 2

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    Nice Work

    Nice job on this one,...flows well,....I like the ending alot.And I'm sure she will rise above someday,....hope I'm there to see it,...Good luck in the contest,...looks like a winner to me,...as always best of my love to you....me.

  • going nowhere
    July 2
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    perfect ending... how can you keep writing such beauty?


  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    July 1
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    Just so beautiful... x

  • SweetXDestiny silver member
    July 1
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    oooh pretty
    love you
  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 1

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    wow god mummy this is an amazing and deep piece. your words are provoking and strong with thought and it says so much. I love it well done
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