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Heart's Desire

To hear your heart's golden melody
chirping it's tune in fresh harmony;
music to my soulful ears
to play on eternally, through the years.


In all the splendor that I can see,
the delicate moonlight shadows me
in subtle caresses of raptured light
beneath the stars that shine so bright.


Incerdedible feelings that fill me within
from soft fluid words, to velvety skin;
as the petals touch from a velvety rose
and the honey-like dew wafts through your nose.


When nightfall comes, and I close my eyes,
lost in the innocence of wanton surprise;
that against you I melt, feeling your fire;
burning the flame of our heart's desire.

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  • Desire gold member
    July 24

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    Precious~

    Beauty of a piece penned along with that border You created~ Excellent use of the word bank
    Love the rhyme too
    Adore honey like dew wafts
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • So beautiful, and so romantic with a touch of sensuality woven within the write.You write so passionatly and your poems are full of emotion that the readers can feel and the images brought forth are always clear and understood. I love the last stanza....

    When nightfall comes, and I close my eyes,
    lost in the innocence of wanton surprise;
    that against you I melt, feeling your fire;
    burning the flame of our heart's desire....

    So soft and sensual.

    You are a real pleasure to read and I wish you all the best in the contest.
    Blessings of love and happiness.
    ~Angel~

  • such longing and passion exudes from your heart dear Sis well done and many blessings always xxxx

  • When nightfall comes, and I close my eyes,
    lost in the innocence of wanton surprise;
    that against you I melt, feeling your fire;
    burning the flame of our heart's desire.
    .............
    Good Write! Solid!

  • Beautiful!

    This is just...beautiful
    The romance in this is just breath-taking and I enjoyed reading this very much!
    A sheer PLEASURE to read!
    Thank you for sharing and for being a part of this contest; I simply LOVED your entry!

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