"My beautiful razor...please make the pain go away...
Please make my wrists bleed red rain.
Please my dear sweet friend, make my suffering end.
I love the feeling of your cold sharp edge deep in my flesh.
It's nearly orgasmic.
Please my candy coated razor blade...
Give me my orgasm.
Take all my pain away, make me feel good,
Even if just for a second.
Please I beg you...Im on my knees pleading for a release
from my painful life.
Please my razor blade...make this be my last strife."
She begged and pleaded for hours on end, Finally the razor blade headed to her wishes...it sliced deep...to deep infact.
Now she is gone...gone from the pain, gone from the world.
She will never know what true love is...the joys there are in life.
She is gone... never to be seen again.
Think About It..Is Your Life Really That Bad? Do You Want To Never Be Seen Again? If So You Would Have Already Done It...
If you were going to really kill ur self you would stop talkin about it and do it.......(this is for everyone)
Comments
1 - 34 of 34
-
nice
this is a great write, i like that the begining seems to show the temptation, and speaks for how tempting it really is for a cutter, but at the end has a harsh short and sweet kind of alturnitive, but be careful who you say that to, some people are really unstable, when i was in my suicidal phase my friend would always tell me if i ever did commet, she would fallow my sorry ass, same concept, but slightly different approach. It worked for me because i always cared more for myfriends then myself great job
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
points for u
-
i like it you have a very good point so ya how are you and whats new and on this poem i feel where your coming from
-
manda, you may have stolen my Licious (lol, but im
<--------MimiViciousToTehBitches xD
-
If I could of...and had the strength to...I guess I would of killed myself back when I had the change to as a kid...now I'm older and I guess I see how different and unique everything is...but how incriminating the world is. I don't think I would just do it though, something would have to make me do it I guess...this poem did just give me something...some hope or aspect on reasons why I should live...it makes me think but inside I want to cry more than I am right now...your question just makes me think I guess...
-
awe. I love this poem. Stroung, powerful , and meaningful i love it.
-
<---- The smexiest Just kidding
-
awsome and cool
wow now that's somethin to think about but i'm just sayin why cut yourself that only brings more and more pain and then death try something else like working out till you pass out or punching and beating up a dead tree or something
-
b
b
-
Amanda...
this really spoke to me you know?
i still cut and you know that, and if you dont, well you do now,
i love this poem...
much love,
Savi -
aww baby even though its a great poem,it hurts me to know u cut but really im not one to talk ya know.....
-
I dont think I could ever kill myself. Life may suck really bad sometimes but ive got friends I would do anything for and I know they would for me and I dont want to leave them here when I get a free ride out. So I still have stuff worth living for. everyone dose they just gotta find it. Great write!
keep in touch you sound like a kool person.
Zannah
-
Okay if i was going to kill myself [tried to many times already] i would stop talking about it and just do it. People only talk about it when they do have the guts to even try.
This is very good i liked it alot. And dont try to kill yourself nothings worth it. We all die sometime in life. When its meant to be. Very well writtened..
Keep it up.
love,
Shelly
-
<------- Mandalicious
Adding your comment:
1 - 34 of 34
