oceans lined with shimmering white stars
flows across the white and red stripes
the same way our freedom flows across our land
showing our independence gained
pulling together in tough times
helping each other out
that is what our country is about
Author notes
photo prompt:Credit: Fragile Liberty by slippyjo-freakingnews.com
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A contest entry
- Quickie 4th of July - Two EASY Options by Sharcu.
300 points, ended July 5, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes....Or Does It? by lowercase prelude.
1500 points, ended July 8, 2008, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very cool write. great one for the 4th.
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Thanks for your entry!
Glad to see you were able to come up with something fresh for the contest! Nicely done, Amy! Very patriotic and exactly what I was looking for
Keep up the great work! 
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Great write for the prompt, or for any time! Best to you in the contest!
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Sparkling!
What a great write for the 4th.! Very patriotic & encouraging. Would that all Americans felt this way... Nice flow & subtle rhyming. Bravo. Red, white & blue all the way!
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Great i liked this alot. Short but you made your point. Its very well worded. I like all of your poems they make me jealous. Great Job
Love,
Shelly Belly
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