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Summer's Eve

Sweet innocence lingers,
a subtle memory of dreams past.
Losing herself in nightfall's rapture,
she succumbs to raptures splendour.
Desire whispers on the moonlit breeze,
bringing honeyed words of desire.
Caressing her skin with fluid fingers,
She shudders in wanton delirium.
Ah! the remarkable summers eve,
that brings her such delicious thoughts,
as she strolls through her Eden,
surrounded by incredible petals of passion.

Author notes

I used all the words in the word bank.
here are my small changes:
Delirious - Delirium
honey - honied
moonlight - moonlit

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  • Heavenly Angel
    July 1

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    Ooooh very nice !
    I LOVE the passion and the romance in this piece...well done
    Thank you so much for sharing and for being part of the contest!
    All the best to you!