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For Alyssa Caitlin (editing)

At Summer-days, when nature shows his bloom
in brightness; smiling clouds now stroke a tree:
fifteen branches, outgrowed the mother womb,
while dreamy eyes recall her joys by sea.

The road to womanhood, beyond bizarre
yet dancing shadows throwed by sun and moon
release your inner beauty like a star,
but Time his hunger swallows childhoods soon.

Now fragrant flowers serve seduction's aim.
Some sweet, some bitter, searching life's inquire
awaking pleasures smashed down angel's flame
and facing girlish charm, for games inspire.

From egg to call the Milky Way your home.
By myths and fairy-tales to place your tome.

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For Alyssa Caitlin, daughter of Samantha
An English sonnet.
Rhyme-scheme: a/b/a/b - c/d/c/d - e/f/e/f/ - g/g
Happy Birthday to you!

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  • MysticalRayne gold member
    July 14, 2008
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    I love this you did a fantastic job !!!!!!!!!!!!! best of luck in the contest