Fire burns bright
deep within her eyes,
no emotions hidden
when this beuaty cries.
Gypsy butterfly spreads her wings
and all here listens when she sings.
Author notes
write me something from the above verse ~ in your own words of course!
A contest entry
- She's a Gypsy by Gypsy-Princess.
400 points, ended July 1, 7 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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aww beautiful love your words here..so fitting for the contest and deserves the shiny HM
Cind
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Awww this is really good brother!!! I really love the imagery and emotion behind this... Congrats on the HM!!!
Angel
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Beautiful write. Typo... should be "beauty". Congrats on the honorable mention.
♥
whisper
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beautiful!
this was an amazing write, your words painted such stunning pictures in mind! keep penning!
loved it!
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Stunning work here. I love this. Very very creative indeed. Well done on your trophy. Methinks this should have ranked as GOLD though.
Dark
Wishes
Wayne Leon
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Wow..
This is amazing. It's so short, and yet the rhyme has it roll beautifully off the tongue into this image of a butterfly shining in the light of a fire in your eyes..
Just wow.
Miss Faerie
Site Greeter
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wow you did a wonderful job.... i miss you hope all is well congrat on a well deserved HM even tho i think should have been more but thats just me........
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this is really beautiful,
i love this poem the imagery and wording in it,
is just fabulas,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
This is just stunning ~ I love it!... x
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its beautiful daddy
i love it 'i love you -
lovely Si
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this is a beautifully and expressive piece and you have written a wonderful and captivating tale.I love the expressiveness of it. well done dad
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I'm not sure that I liked the subject, but you penned a beautiful tale.
Nicely done friend,
Criss
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