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May The Candles Burn

May the candles burn

on your birthday

to make the morning

become as exciting as you sweetest dream.

 

Let the joy flow all day long

while you celebrate the magic of being fifteen.

And on your special time of celebration

have a chance to find extra laughter

from all the loving surprises

that you deserve to come your way.

 

Now dance to your favorite songs,

remember every heart pounding scene,

which a movie gave you

while your mind waltzed to a daydream melody.

 

Tomorrow will bring what you hope for most

including Prince Charming riding his gallant white steed.

 

It will happen when cupid finishes his archery lessons,

so sleep in the land of hope's sunrises until he is done.

 

Not to leave you with any worries,

all of that was given as the jewels

to fill your night's necklace in diamonds of smiles.

 

However, circumstance does have a sense of humor

so you should also know,

Prince Charming has been delayed in visiting

because his armor was recalled,

rumor is they found uranium in the metal as reason for it being shining.

Plus his stallion is also having problems,

government working on pollution standards for animals,

haven't got bugs work out on smog check system

 

But never fear he'll arrive soon enough

though maybe wearing a jogging suit and driving a rented compact car.

 

Hope these verses gave you a few smile

as prelude to all the wonderful things that you birthday will bring.

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Wishing you a very Happy Birthday

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  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 1, 2008

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    That was such a sweet birthday poem. Sometimes I wish my parents would care enough to write me a poem, or make me something, like I do them. Either they buy me something, or I get nothing at all. This was well written, I really hope you do well in the contest.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 1, 2008

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    A Most beautiful Birthday composition---Beautiful Thoughts within the beautiful words--Well Done!!
    ---Best of luck in the contest!!


  • MysticalRayne
    July 1, 2008

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    They gave me a smile and I loved it ~ so sweet and magical thank you so much for your entry and best of luck in the contest


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    July 1, 2008

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    Awww this is very sweet
    I'm rather partial to birthday writes as two of my kids and my daughter in law recently had birthdays
    I wish for you the best; this is just sweet