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Gods Coloring Book

No one has ever matched all the colors,
in Gods coloring book.
They change at times through sunshine,
take time and take a look.

How within a day as the petals unfold,
such beauty for the eyes so bold.
And if you stick around,
you will see excellence take hold.

He has a way of perserving his art,
he dries them with the sun .
We as people make popourie ,
and the scents are living on.

The waters of this world it's the same,
if you stop and look as the sunrise does bring.
Such vivid shadows of the clouds about,
and the glitter waves strewn about such excitment makes one shout.

Then listen to the new born within the scene,
feel the love and the newness it brings.
Breath deep and know upon this page,
In Gods coloring book within you stayed.

For his coloring book comes with sound,
from the highest highes to the ground.
He has brought to you life in its purest form,
and upon it such colors he  so adorned .

Colors often we pick and hold with care,
and some even place those colors within their hair.
Feel the suple color of the water so blue,
and know this color is oh so cool.
And for all Gods children our colors are there to.

Why can't we make such beauty as those upon the land,
why cant our colors walk hand in hand .
Must we be the only colors to fight amongst themselves,
when together we have it all so why can't we see this love
and put old misery up on a shelf.


Author notes

We are all at fault so come on today why cant the adults just as the children learn how to play

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  • None But Nim
    July 7, 2008
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    This is really good! I wish you luck!


  • Simply Olivia
    July 2, 2008

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    "No one has ever matched all the colors,
    in Gods coloring book." - There is a lot that I like in this poem; especially your conclusion


  • ourgirlFriday
    July 1, 2008

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    I like it!

    You should have entered the "Color me" or "Speak to me in Colors" contest as well. Best of luck. A few typos, such as first stanza, third line: through.
    But very nice write! I hope you win!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    this is a wonderful and heartfelt piee and is so beautifully written with deepness. a wonderful piece


  • isabelwk
    July 1, 2008
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    Nicely done

    Very heartfelt words. Indeed, why can't we walk together?


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    July 1, 2008
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    Very beautiful write Best of luck dearie

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