No one has ever matched all the colors,
in Gods coloring book.
They change at times through sunshine,
take time and take a look.
How within a day as the petals unfold,
such beauty for the eyes so bold.
And if you stick around,
you will see excellence take hold.
He has a way of perserving his art,
he dries them with the sun .
We as people make popourie ,
and the scents are living on.
The waters of this world it's the same,
if you stop and look as the sunrise does bring.
Such vivid shadows of the clouds about,
and the glitter waves strewn about such excitment makes one shout.
Then listen to the new born within the scene,
feel the love and the newness it brings.
Breath deep and know upon this page,
In Gods coloring book within you stayed.
For his coloring book comes with sound,
from the highest highes to the ground.
He has brought to you life in its purest form,
and upon it such colors he so adorned .
Colors often we pick and hold with care,
and some even place those colors within their hair.
Feel the suple color of the water so blue,
and know this color is oh so cool.
And for all Gods children our colors are there to.
Why can't we make such beauty as those upon the land,
why cant our colors walk hand in hand .
Must we be the only colors to fight amongst themselves,
when together we have it all so why can't we see this love
and put old misery up on a shelf.
Author notes
We are all at fault so come on today why cant the adults just as the children learn how to play
A contest entry
- Show me the Light inside of your Muse by None But Nim.
900 points, ended July 7, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is really good! I wish you luck!
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"No one has ever matched all the colors,
in Gods coloring book." - There is a lot that I like in this poem; especially your conclusion
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I like it!
You should have entered the "Color me" or "Speak to me in Colors" contest as well. Best of luck. A few typos, such as first stanza, third line: through.
But very nice write! I hope you win!
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this is a wonderful and heartfelt piee and is so beautifully written with deepness. a wonderful piece
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Nicely done
Very heartfelt words. Indeed, why can't we walk together?

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Very beautiful write
Best of luck dearie


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