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Go (Cinquain)

Let go
It's far too late
For you to be trying
You need to acknowledge, move on
And go

Does it flow well? Could you feel the emotion?

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 1, 2008

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    this is short but it is a strong poem, kind of like talking to someone and knowing a few words would be best, keep it flowing