Divine by Pisces rainbow at All poetry

Surging to replenish,

Waves envelope the land.

Deep blue swirls of energy

Flow swiftly towards the sand.

Surrounding land, umbrella sky,

Protection from above.

Gift of precious soothing hues,

Symbolizing love.

Masterpiece of freshness,

Enticing to the soul.

Peaceful healing power,

Creates calm in the whole.

Heavenly treasures,

Intended to refine.

Conveying stability, serenity;

Celestially divine.

A contest entry

Colours by MariGoes. 1100 points, ended July 15, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Aesthete2000
July 7

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Very convincing---divine is a color,
the blue of the heavens and the waves,
"Deep blue swirls of energy"
enveloping the reader.

Indeed, the feeling and color of "divine."

Aesthete
darrylblacksr
July 6

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The calming beauty of God's unconditional love. To me this poem represents the creation of God and all his wonders...
Thank for sharing it with me and congrats in the contest...
Poetry-and-rhyme
July 6

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oh yes auntie your sweet background is just simply adorable along the pic and your wordss i adore it furthermore i wanna read more of ur art and yes masterpiece of freshness enticing to the soul
Yemassee
July 6

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Nature, under that umbrella, but not just of sky, but of God...I assume that was your meaning.

From Genesis 1:

In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth. And the earth was without form, and void; and darkness was upon the face of the deep. And the Spirit of God moved upon the face of the waters. And God said, Let there be light: and there was light. And God saw the light, that it was good: and God divided the light from the darkness.

I think your poem aptly agrees with those words, is an excellent companion piece, and above all, reads well.

I am glad you entered the contest.
Providence
July 5
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Providence
July 5

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This beautiful piece invoke a sigh. Very comforting.
Just reading it seems....

"Enticing to the soul.

Peaceful healing power,

Creates calm in the whole"

Wonderfully done!

Marianne
rc3
July 3

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calm beauty
to see he blue of the sea and hear the sounds of god's creation truly sooths my soul you have capture the love

light and love
Robert
Olivia33
July 2
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I like the second stanza especially.
goalsv
July 2
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A great discriptive poem, a place to see and also metephoric. Very calming poem.
Brooklyn NYC
July 2

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Love this
wow, this is stunning, the love you capture here absolutely worthy of an eternal walk, beautifully don't I could feel it. it was like being there with you great work,
storiesuntold
July 1

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Oh this is so lovely
What I would give for a few days there in your paradise .This is truly beautiful the colors the view I could almost smell the salt air in his write
BuriedTreasures
July 1

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Beautiful and abundant in imagery--Your words breathe life into the picture--Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!!
OrangeMarmalade
July 1

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I wondered where you got to
Now I know you're on vacation. Lovely piece indeed! I thought I might try this contest, but you have the better part, so I'd better not. Good luck!
Ace - LightWithinMe
July 1

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Hello.

You have used the colours of sea, sky, etc. to describe the wonder that is Earth. The description is rich pertaining to the form and function of Earth's many facets, as well as offering deeper meanings as to why they are present. And both sky and sea do indeed have a calming influence upon us. Well that is how I read it anyway. Best of luck in the contest.

My regards.