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I cannot tell you

The rusted color sunset
Looks so beautiful on the horizon
Nothing can compare, however
To the beauty of what I feel for you
This feeling I feel
Is more beautiful than butterflies in Spring
More beautiful than Lilly's floating on a crystal pond
The most beautiful sight on earth
Could never come close to this beauty
It is the beauty of everlasting love
A love that I cannot fight
Try as I might I cannot tell you
The fear of heartbreak consumes me
As beautiful as this is
The fear is far from it
So I tell you only here
In this poem you shall never read
That I love you

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