Deep within the bowels of the earth,
tormented spirits scream their worst.
Serpents tongues lick liquid flames,
slashing flesh, I play vicious games.
My dreams are full of deadly desires,
to run with the wind, burn with fire.
Dance in lava as it erupts,
grab innocent minds to corrupt.
Bleeding sin into fragile brains,
leaving behind my deadly stain.
Twist your sunshine into night,
watch you tremble, smell the fright.
Pleasure pulsates through my veins,
feasting hungrily on pointed pain.
Rinsing your soul, wringing it out,
listen to screams, hear them shout.
Feeding acid into brittle hearts,
blowing up brains, tearing bodies apart.
Breeding disease, agony and despair,
doing it with style, grace and flair.
Paved within the walls of my hell,
at murderous torture I do excel.
My caustic whips keep them down,
in this place I wear the crown
There's nothing more I'd rather do,
than pour my revulsion into you.
One by one, I'll watch you fall,
until the day I own you all!
Author notes
Hell and where I stand...queen of course!
Picture credit; Red_Queen_by_Dianae
LadyDementia
Option 5
"Cut out my eyes so I can't see this cruel world hates me"
A contest entry
- Group Contest For Devourers Of Darkness by Lost Vampyre Angel.
2200 points, ended July 17, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What do you think? {options} by Iloveugh.
300 points, ended July 23, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
Loving the darkness here, you wield it so Damn well...
Fantastic!!!
A much needed dark evil fix... Lol!
Compelling throughout, but the last 2 lines made me smile & laugh evilly...
Love it...
Well done!!!
-
Great poem i loved reading it but plz reread the rules before i DQ you. thanks for entering.
..<3..
Shelly -
"blowing up brains, tearing bodies apart." tis my favorite part . congrats on the gold im going to have to read more of your work now
-
Take me!!!!
Your vision is truly dark but with such style and panache! I really enjoyed reading this with its undercurrent of humor. Excellent rhyme scheme! Keep your pen to the page and good luck in the contest! -
Decadent
I am guided by your call of wrath,
One day to meet upon the path.
No remorse shall I feel once come upon you,
For these torturous delights...I lust them too.There is much beauty to gleen in your promise of torment.
-
this is very very well written,
your wording is superb, very impressive,
also your rhyming never goes off key,
and you keep on topic, i like this write alot,
all my love, keep penning,
kitty xxx -
WOWZERS!!! 
Evilllllllll... hehehe
Wow hunny, what an awesome write! You are definitely the Queen
And of course it is all done with style, grace and flair
So cool to read one of your wickedly cool longer writes!!
-
wow, you know this is something i mean that this is something i mean that you have done it again, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
