Awakened spirit,
Elevated consciousness,
Filled with divine love.
Author notes
(haiku, free verse)
A contest entry
- Round 3 - The Final Show by Florida Sunshine.
850 points, ended July 14, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely
This is true we should all elevate our feeling for love and start helping one another
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Beautifully displayed
Your picture captures a serene moment with its brilliant colors and background.An appreciation of sight and word of praise. -
Hi
I'm not sure what this is, not a poem is it? anyway I love the page and the colors
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How clever you are in your write. I do enjoy a good Haiku ~ and you certainly pulled it off. Usually I tell which part I liked most, but in all honesty I'd have to say I like it as a whole.
The clever part is how you combined the two to make one flowing poem.
Congrats on making the final round, clearly you can see your poetic abilities, it was my pleasure to have you Pisces rainbow.
Best of luck to you
Florida Sunshine
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Another good one.
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WOW! I am so impressed with this short right that it gave me chills.
Background kinda bothered me some but it goes with the poem.
Well, you did indeed showed them what you have got
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Hello. Short, sharp and to the point, although I have to say I don't know anything about haiku's, other than they are very short, ahhaha. Best of luck in the contest. My regards.
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VERY UPLIFTING!!!
As one spirit rises up and their outlook is bright they have this beautiful feeling of being as they say on cloud nine.
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