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Muse, As It Was

My muse
Is a melancholy epitaph
Scrawled amongst the headstones
That will never leave me alone

My muse
Casts a shadow behind me
Leaving a trail of darkness
A reflection of my duress

My muse
Are but resounding echoes
Reverberating down wasted, decrepit halls
This haunted writing on moss covered walls

My muse
Is a spoiled longing of yesterday
A byproduct of memory trash
With expiration dates long since passed

My muse is my scarred past

Author notes

without the gore, without all the glitz, my muse lay in a blitz

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 2, 2008

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    An excellent portrayal of your muse, the imagery is fab. You really did get every angle in here hun, superbly done. My muse was sick All the best in the contest bro


  • Tattboyspet
    July 1, 2008

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    I think this is the first one that actually gave the muse a personality
    having a past (no matter how scarred) makes us who we are presently
    thank you for your entry