Maybe Ive forgotten the name and the address
Of everyone Ive ever known
Its nothing I regret
Save it for another day
Its the school exam and the kids have run away
I would like a place I could call my own
Have a conversation on the telephone
Wake up every day that would be a start
I would not complain of my wounded heart
I was upset you see
Almost all the time
You used to be a stranger
Now you are mine
I wouldnt even trust you
Ive not got much to give
Were dealing in the limits
And we dont know who with
You may think that Im out of hand
That Im naive, Ill understand
On this occasion, its not true
Look at me, Im not you
I would like a place I could call my own
Have a conversation on the telephone
Wake up every day that would be a start
I would not complain of my wounded heart
I was a short fuse
Burning all the time
You were a complete stranger
Now you are mine
I would like a place I could call my own
Have a conversation on the telephone
Wake up every day that would be a start
I would not complain about my wounded heart
Just wait till tomorrow
I guess thats what they all say
Just before they fall apart
its 36 lines, don't kill me x.x sorry if it hasn't won any trophies yet, but I'm sure this poem is on its way to have one..
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not bad, a bit more like lyrics but of course still a poem. i like it either way
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Very nice poem. I really liked it. I think you did a really great job on this. Keep on writing.
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Very sad write
The feelings you have are feelings that goes back in time for the young people even in my day we all seem to have days we wanted the same things . I hope you find those friends you so desire
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Thank you for your comment, I noticed along the way of my poems that they become songs.. and I also hoped that with the repeating that they wouldn't drag the reader.. and thank goodness it didn't!
thanks for your thoughtful comment 
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Thank you for your comment, I noticed along the way of my poems that they become songs.. and I also hoped that with the repeating that they wouldn't drag the reader.. and thank goodness it didn't! thanks for your thoughtful comment
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Wow, just wow. I definitely know this feeling. You have such an intense way of putting words together that makes the poem so much more powerful.
"I was a short fuse
Burning all the time
You were a complete stranger
Now you are mine"
Perfect lines. I was seriously in awe after reading this. Good luck in that contest you enterrred
This was beautiful♥
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there's one line that sticks out to me in this one..."save it for another day". that's me, definitely; i keep putting things off, taking for granted that tomorrow keeps coming.
it was a great poem/song =) good work!
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