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Dear Dad

In my mind I always figured you'd be there,

you kept trying to tell me to stand on my own,

but I basked in the sunlight of your love

never wanting or needing to grow up.

 

I felt so safe and soft within your shadow

in my fairytale dreams you would always be there,

but little whispers from your soul kept nudging me

that you wouldn't be forever there for me.

 

You wanted me to stand on my own two feet,

to know who I was when you were no longer around,

you could see who I was very deep inside

but needed me to discover myself before you went.

 

You kept telling me how life would change

how I would need to stand on my own two feet,

that as I grew life would take on so many different colours

and I would need my inner strength to face life on  my own.

 

But I felt so safe and soft within your shadow

in my fairytale dreams you would always be there,

but little whispers from your soul kept nudging me

that you wouldn't be forever there for me.

 

You were trying to tell me to go and chase my dreams

and no matter how much you loved me you wouldn't always be there,

you told me how so many of your dreams went unexplored

and not to let winter come into my life too soon.

 

I'm still trying to avoid walking away from your love

for I feel so safe and soft within within your shadow,

but I know I must move on to find the depth of me

and I will always want to see that pride in your eyes..

 

 

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WJbozdpcPew

Lyrics of the Song 'Winter' from the Album Tales Of A Librarian.


Snow can wait
I forgot my mittens
Wipe my nose
Get my new boots on
I get a little warm in my heart
When I think of winter
I put my hand in my father's glove
I run off
Where the drifts get deeper
Sleeping beauty trips me with a frown
I hear a voice
"Your must learn to stand up for yourself
Cause I can't always be around"
He says
When you gonna make up your mind
When you gonna love you as much as I do
When you gonna make up your mind
Cause things are gonna change so fast
All the white horses are still in bed
I tell you that I'll always want you near
You say that things change my dear

Boys get discovered as winter melts
Flowers competing for the sun
Years go by and I'm here still waiting Withering where some snowman was
Mirror mirror where's the crystal palace
But I only can see the myself
Skating around the truth who I am
But I know dad the ice is getting thin

When you gonna make up your mind
When you gonna love you as much as I do
When you gonna make up your mind
Cause things are gonna change so fast
All the white horses are still in bed
I tell you that I'll always want you near
You say that things change my dear

Hair is grey
And the fires are burning
So many dreams
On the shelf
You say I wanted you to be proud of me
I always wanted that myself

He says
When you gonna make up your mind
When you gonna love you as much as I do
When you gonna make up your mind
Cause things are gonna change so fast
All the white horses have gone ahead
I tell you that I'll always want you near
You say that things change
My dear

[ Winter Lyrics @ http://www.toriamoslyrics.org/ ]


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  • Ahhh, my favorite song from her!
    This was beautifully sad, just like the song. Wonderful images and a lot of parts I can relate to immensely... The ending was great and wrapped everything up perfectly. Thanks for entering, and good luck
    Jeanette*~