Enriching evil
with his desire
My muse boils
within the fire.
Visceral thoughts
come out to play,
rampant with rot
and bleeding decay.
His serpent tongue
breaths despair.
I won't challenge him,
I wouldn't dare.
He cuts to the core,
with sneering scorn.
And will happily kill
your sweet first born.
Mad as a march hare,
hungry for domination.
Sometimes he sulks,
or goes on vacation.
But I wouldn't change him,
not for the world.
He's violent, he's mine,
and oh god he just hurled!
Author notes
Picture credit: Bloody Skull by ~White-Heart
Prompt; Introduce your muse.
Here he is, alive and kicking! Despite my theme I actually have a very weak stomach when it comes to horror, quite bizarre really..lol.
A contest entry
- Introduction to your muse by Tattboyspet.
450 points, ended July 9, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ha!...a brilliant and funny take on our muse. Fast and furious. Well done
Mariana
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hehe i love this grandma i really do,
this is so so beautiful, your rhyme scheme is always so brilliant, i love this so so much,
all my love, keep penning,
best of luck in the contest,
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hehe this is such a clever write and I love the boarder that you have used for this piece as well. I love it and Im not sure whether to be scard or laugh a clever write grandma
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i got a shirt with that yin yang on it, but on this what was an amazing poem, it is nice to met your muse, i think i will introduce the world to mine, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Oh My God! I do not know whether to be scared or laugh....lol excellent poem and your muse is just right!
All the best in the contest!
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Hahaha, I like your muse! Maybe he could play with mine sometime. What beautiful music they'd make. I wouldn't mind Bethamy being victimized by your muse. He seems super facken cool, and I do like darkness.
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Wahoo!!! Fabulous!!
Heeheee... I love it!!!
Wicked write hunny!! Your muse is an evil wee thing but we love him!! Ewwww he hurled
This is brilliant and totally sums up your muse!
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ohmygosh what did you unleash on us?!!! LOVE IT Best to you in the contest ~Trisha~
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spelling: He violent (second last line)
this is AMAZING!!!!! I thought your muse was superb and he left me squirming for more
p.s. - I THRIVE on horror and the more gruesome the better in my view!
thank you for your entry
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Hehe thanks, could have gone on a lot longer..lol. He types faster than I think, corrected it
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You know, I've never been a huge fan of lengthy writes, but there's one person and one person ALONE on this site that keeps me intrigued no matter how long his write is: WayneLeonLearmond ... he is SUPERB and sometimes his writing goes on for me to read for over 30 minutes!!!!
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I've seen your comments there, I read a lot of his myself, he is awesome! Where he gets it all from I'd love to know. Keep asking him if he'd care to share but alas, all under lock and key
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I've already told him (along with MANY others!) that he should get published - he would make a killing in the horror fiction!
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I've told him the same thing...he would make a fortune...tho would be brilliant to get inside his mind for a bit...lol.
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roflmao! I'd probably run screaming for the door!!!!
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Hehe, I think I would be scribbling making as many notes as possible..lol. Wonder if his muse is male or female...
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I think he's muse is part satan and part satan's minions lol!
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I wholly agree! Wouldn't mind having the other half of that mix myself
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