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My Muse

My muse is indescribable
because. . .
I've never seen him,
or is it 'her'
with a very, very gruff voice?

He plays on my age,
and taunts me with what
I think are memories
of my sibling-less childhood;
sends me scampering after Google,

in an effort to discover
something about the war service,
in WWI, of a father who died
when I was only three.
Yes, I'm a baby boomer from WWI!

But just this week
he played the worst ever
of his tricks on me,
making no effort to stop me
writing a poem of twenty lines

and then,quietly, watching me
submit it for a contest which
I, too late, discovered
had clearly asked
for only twenty words.

Although,
when I come to think about it,
it wasn't really his fault, but mine.
I'm told that, at my age, I should
expect to get these mental aberrations.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 1, 2008
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    Hehe love this, a superb take on the prompt. All the best in the contest


  • Tattboyspet
    July 1, 2008
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    spelling: somehing; waasn't

    lol - I adored this one! have to admit though, my memory is that bad that I dare not even attempt going the path of lies: I would never remember what I lied about!!!!
    - methinks it was not the muse's fault for the mistake, rather the fingers that wouldn't listen to him/her
    thank you for your entry


    • Shenton silver member
      July 1, 2008

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      Thankyou for pointing out the spellings. I was halfway through doing my spell check when I must have inadvertently pressed the 'send' key and everything disappeared from my screen. I reckon he was standing behind me at the time.

      Best wishes from 'down-under'

      Shenton